Thankfully, the book was free because I got a couple of chapters in and decided to not read the rest of it. It is shoddily written. It appears the book was not proofread. The author doesn’t even bother to get the character’s names right, which is kind of hilarious. If the author can’t be bothered to keep her characters straight, then I can’t be bothered to read her story.

Good plot, however the writing itself needs polishing. It reads like a middle school student’s attempt at writing a novel. The editing was poorly executed, misspelled words and words missing in sentences.

I made it to chapter 3 and had to stop. It was too painful. Who is your editor? Found four glaring errors. Your obsession with body feelings is “nauseating “ . Way too many adjectives. Reminds me of the day when your teacher asked for a 1000 word essay and you filled it with to many adjectives and repetition to make the count.

Good book fast paced always enjoy this author. Thanks k

Very repetitive & long-winded. Horrible editing.