Great but a couple of plot holes
5
By Ubanium_Rosarium
There is a good sized hospital - GWU - less than a mile from the WH, why would anyone be taken to one three miles away? I could see if the hospital in the book was a military one, but it appears to just be a normal DC hospital.
A character has an item taken from them by force and hours later is using the same type of item with no mention of it being replaced nor any real opportunity for the character to get it replaced. This is an item that there is never a mention of the character having two of said type of item either.
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Overall a very good book, that just needs a little more work on the editorial level.