Story is decent, honestly. You’re pulled out of the story every time “I’s” is used instead of “my” and other obvious grammatical errors. Author needs a good editor. I won’t be purchasing any more books until grammar is corrected. Too bad. The story is decent.

I absolutely am in love with these books. However, the only really big issue that I have is that they ALL have such huge and blatantly obvious grammatical errors in them, that it ALMOST puts me off reading it together. The story is great, though, and I love the characters.

I found this book while flipping through the top free books. Beautiful cover and title caught my eye. I’m so glad I downloaded it! I was hooked and read through it in a few quick days. Great story. I’m in love with May and Kade and can’t wait to read the rest of their story. Easy to relate to them with the way it is written. If you liked Twilight you will jump right into this book and be sucked in. Chapter 13 was my favorite. (Sexy barn scene is all I can say to not ruin anything). You could feel May’s emotions like you are right there. Loved the book and I was sad to see it end. I’m headed to look for another story by her while I am for the next one in this series.

I was so entranced with this story! Can’t wait till book two comes out!

I loved this book! I couldn't put it down. Great humor with amazing action, terrifying encounters, and an enlightening love story. I can't wait for the sequel. Well done!

Overall, the story was a great and the characters were engaging. My only issues came in the form of spelling mistakes. None so serious that you couldn't understand where she was going, but definitely something to keep in mind. Great job overall!