Forever My Home

If you are on the run, don’t buy and sell three cars. You need to complete paperwork with your name, social security number, address, driver’s license information, etc. in order to buy or sell a car, and to get the car registered to get a license plate. Definitely a stupid flaw in the story. You can’t have a patio off your upper floor apartment. Patios are paved areas off the ground floor of the house. Adalyn had a balcony or deck, not a patio.. The book went from first person to third person, which was an annoying choice that the author made. It would have been better to either do all third person or take turns in first person between Adalyn and Archer. Lots of errors in spelling, punctuation, and grammar, but I find that to frequently be the case in ebooks, especially free ones. I’m glad I didn’t pay for this book because it would not have been worth it. I’m not reading any more from this author.

The story line was good, however there was a million other little stories going on in the book that it gave me whiplash. A lot of unnecessary things added to a story that wasn’t needed. Definitely not a fan of this author.