I read the sample of betrayal and I was kinda mad. Why’d she have to pick cliff. I wanted her to pick tanner. He’s closer to her age and nicer than cliff. I understand why she chose cliff but why couldn’t she get both.

Made it to chapter 2. Thank God it was free!

It’s wonderful to read a great book that has romance & is good and clean—n sex I loved the book and I loved the characters

I love how you brought everything in. I did see some moss wording but it did not diminish how I loved the story.

Okay so I’m my opinion, I would not recommend this to a reader. Coming from a younger author that is just starting I do feel like I know a couple things to help with this book. First of all I wished the book had a theme or an undeniable drive for Alexis and the rest of the characters. I mean there was a beginning, middle, and end, but Alexis had no personal problem with really anything. She had no growth to her as a character which is especially important to have in a story like this because SPOILER: she turns into a creature of a sort that requires needed development. I won’t get into everything but not my personal favorite

I wasn’t able to get past the first chapter. The sentences are short and choppy, the characters don’t have descriptions or personality. The dialog between characters feels like a middle schooler wrote it. I really really really wanted to love this book but I just can’t. The cover is beautiful though.

Recommend: No -Apologies to the Author, but the sentences were very difficult to get enraptured with the story. It seemed like it was a rough draft that hadn’t been edited.

ok at first i was like eh this books isn’t my favorite....i couldn’t believe he just disappeared. at that point i was giving up on this book- but i’m actually happy i didn’t i just- they ending and i’m just 😌 🤯

I absolutely loved this book! I recently read all the books from her curse of the moon series & fell in love with the writings of Stacy Claflin ❤️ she has officially became one of my favorite authors. My ONLY complaint would be that there are some grammar mistakes in the book but it doesn’t take away from the story at all & you can easily tell what was meant! I can not wait to start the next one!!

What color was her house? Was her room small? What does she look like? When the light bulbs burst do the cringe at all? When she sneaks from her house, why and how? There’s nothing relatable in this character. The book is deadpan. Each paragraph is no more than 3 sentences long.