Nightfall’s flight (chapter two)
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By mistyfox🦊😻
“Lost? What do you mean, lost?” Nightfall hissed. The two kits backed up quickly and Nightfall relaxed a little to not frighten the two kits. “Go back to Mouseflight and send Lionwing please.” She could barely speak calmly but it was good enough because Sagekit’s fur smoothed out and she led her sister away.
Nightfall waited impatiently for her mate and after a few heartbeats of his absence, she decided to search for Berrykit alone. He couldn’t have gotten far. She ran forward, sticking her nose up in the air for his scent. She smelt it easily and followed it westward. It led over thick growth and even crossed stale twoleg scent but they never crossed after that. Berrykit must have wandered off really far because Nightfall could find no end to his scent trail. Until she did, of course. It was almost twilight when she caught a mist spray on her pelt. She looked up, and saw a River. Berrykit’s trail went straight through it. Nightfall trembled so violently that she could hardly stand. His dream the night before from Starclan. Was it just a coincidence? No more time for thinking. She lunged into the icy depths and dove under. The current was too storing and the water wasn’t clear enough to see in. She bobbed her head helplessly above the water, just be pushed back under again. She yowled her son’s name countless times, and it soon became too dark to see. That’s when she felt it. She was still finding it hard to swim, but she somehow made it to a shallower part and hauled herself to she Sandy bank. A tuft of her briefly touched her hind leg. She immediately dove under again and hauled the fur bundle with her teeth. She brought it to the shore.
It was Berrykit. His fur matte black, his eyes closed and his body was broken. The rocks beneath the surface and the colliding water probably did this. Even though Nightfallk knew that her kit was dead she still meowed pleadingly. “Wake up, Berrykit! Wake up or you’ll get sick from the cold!” Silence.
What an awful way to die for a poor kit. He was just curious. Nightfall began to yowl with such a fierce pain that eventually, Lionwing found her, wet and kneeling beside her son’s dead body.
Chapter 3 in the next book of this series.
Loved it!
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By catgjg
Great book!! I stole the names IvyMist and DoveCreek from Ivypaw and Dovepaw XD
——Chapter 2 of SatyrPaw’s Story——
SatyrPaw fidgeted uncomfortably. “Sit still.” BrightFeather muttered. She nosed him closer to the moonstone. “Warriors of StarClan. I present this apprentice to you. May you find him fit to be a warrior of StoneClan.” Her voice echoed throughout the chilly cavern. “Now touch the moonstone with your nose.” BrightFeather mewed. “Then what?” SatyrPaw mewed, fear edging his tone. “Then the warriors of StarClan will come to you.” SatyrPaw obeyed, the moonstone’s coldness sent shivers down his spine. He awoke, not in a grassy, lush meadow, but in a dark, damp (and stinky) forest filled with mist. “Hello?” SatyrPaw mewed. “Hello, SatyrPaw.” A chilling voice came from behind him. “Who are you?” He tried to sound brave, but.. “I can smell your fear, young one.” The voice murmured, now right next to his ear. “Leave me be!” SatyrPaw yelped.
“Be not afraid. I am HowlingBreeze.”
“Why should I care who you are?” He retorted. In an instant a white streak darted forward and tackled SatyrPaw, knocking the wind out of him. Gasping for air, SatyrPaw tried desperately to get away. “LET HIM GO!” SatyrPaw could recognize HowlingBreeze’s snarl. “I was only going to nick his ear..” the white cat rasped.
“I said let him go, MarrowGleam.”
“Fine.” Spat MarrowGleam. “But if you’re going to punish him anytime soon, find me.” MarrowGleam hissed.
“I am aware, but he will not be punished soon, go find your apprentice, OnyxPaw.” MarrowGleam hesitated, gazing at SatyrPaw. “Onyx is too obedient. This one’s more rebellious. I can sense it.”
“Go!” HowlingBreeze hissed through gritted teeth. After HowlingBreeze watched MarrowGleam stalk away, her attention snapped back to the gasping apprentice at her paws. She glared down at him. “SatyrPaw do you know where you are?”
“The Dark Forest?”
“Correct.”
“Why am I here and not in StarClan?” SatyrPaw whispered, standing up and facing her, though still cowering in fear.
“Because, The Dark Forest has great plans for you..” HowlingBreeze’s lips drew back in a large, yellow-toothed grin.
——————-Hope you enjoyed!——————
Next chapter is in the next book! 😁
I love the cover on this book. It’s so good! Probably one of my faves.
—SatyrLeaf of StoneClan
Hey
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By pikachu cinderace
What about me. I haven’t been on here. Suuuuuuuprg is worse then me. Your probably not that busy with life. You’re writing reviews.
Huh
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By suuuuuprg
Then why are you still writing stories.
Nice counter Mossyfang.
Mossyfang
I didn’t say ‘ISN’T NICE!’
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By soph of bred
I said sometimes and maybe. Now that I think of it I’m dumb everyone can blame me 🥲
Oakstream
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By KOIStream
I wish buddy, I wish.
And anyway, at least I had the guts to write this
Join alternate universe SkyClan!
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By warriorsIScool
:D yw! Btw the kits’ warrior names are Swishleaf, Fallingsun, Mapleflight, and Chocolatefoot or Chocolatepaws (whichever one you prefer!)
Bai!
ThunderClan, RiverClan, and ShadowClan are now closed, the message board is the first arc, empty arcs are the New Prophecy arc and Power of Three, and WindClan is A Vision Of Shadows. SkyClan is the Omen of the Stars and BloodClan is in Dawn of the Clans. The information to submit is in the Broken Code arc. Thanks Espresso Cat!
*inhales*
*****IF YOU HAVEN’T SUBMITTED CATS BEFORE, PLEASE CHECK THE REVIEWS OF ANY BROKEN CODE BOOK BEFORE SUBMITTING!*****
*exhales* sorry for all caps just had to make it clear 😂 😜
SkyClan:
Leader: Shadestar, large brown tom with black spots and a large scar on his left front leg. Formerly of ShadowClan. Submitted by oooooof. manana. d fr.
Deputy: Rootstripe, dark brown tabby tom with swirly black stripes and amber eyes. Submitted by GalacticSkies.
(Apprentice, Lilacpaw)
Medicine cat(s): Nightfall, pure black she-cat with green eyes. Submitted by MagnoliaHeart.
(Apprentice, Bookpaw)
Warriors:
Pineclaw, large black tom with green eyes. Formerly of ShadowClan. Submitted by oooooof. manana. d fr.
(Apprentice, Nompaw)
Robinflight, orange tom. Submitted by MagnoliaHeart.
Lunarsky, black tom with hazel eyes. Submitted by MagnoliaHeart.
Dawnstripe, yellow-orange tabby she-cat with amber eyes. Submitted by xXGalacticSkiesXx.
Featherflight, white she-cat with yellow flecks and blue eyes. Submitted by GalacticSkies.
Darkstorm, black tom with a white belly, muzzle, chest, tail-tip, and eye markings. Submitted by GalacticSkies.
Dewstorm, yellow-orange tabby tom with blue eyes and one white paw. Submitted by GalacticSkies.
Thunderfall, dark gray tabby tom with orange-brown stripes and streaks and darker gray streaks. Submitted by GalacticSkies.
Nettleswept, brown tom with blue eyes. Submitted by Espresso Cat.
Leafwhisker, light brown tabby she-cat with green eyes and leafy white spots on her muzzle, tail, chest, belly, and paws. Submitted by GalacticSkies.
Oceanwave, sandy-furred tabby tom with wavy stripes and blue eyes. Submitted by GalacticSkies.
Darkfall, pure black she-cat. Submitted by Hazelstar of KindClan.
Dawnfire, fiery yellow-eyed she-cat with an orange fading into yellow pelt and creamy white markings. Submitted by GalacticSkies.
(Apprentice, Hollypaw)
Queens:
Scarletsky, light gray she-cat with amber eyes. Mother to Lunarsky’s kits, Slatekit, Justicekit, and Darkkit. Submitted by MagnoliaHeart.
Berryswing, plump cream tabby she-cat with orange eyes. Two kits, Sweetkit and Waddlekit. Submitted by Espresso Cat. Morningdew, white calico she-cat with yellow and black patches and blue eyes. Mother to Emberkit, Rushkit, and Brightkit. Submitted by GalacticSkies.
Kits:
Slatekit, gray she-kit
Justicekit, black she-kit
Darkkit, dark gray tom-kit with a white chest
Waddlekit, cream-and-brown tom-kit with orange eyes
Sweetkit, cream she-kit with blue eyes
Emberkit, white she-kit with dark gray patches
Rushkit, dark gray tabby she-kit
Brightkit, yellow tabby she-kit with amber eyes
Apprentices:
Bookpaw, brown she-cat with darker rings around her tail and blue eyes. Submitted by Espresso Cat.
Nompaw, soft cream she-cat with dark rings around her tail and blue eyes. Submitted by Espresso Cat.
Sourpaw, brown tom with orange eyes and rings around his tail. Submitted by Espresso Cat.
Lilacpaw, white she-cat with violet eyes and black paws, ears, and tail-tip. Submitted by GalacticSkies.
Hollypaw, jet-black she-cat with dark green eyes and white paws and tail-tip. Submitted by GalacticSkies.
Elders:
Sunleap, yellow-orange tabby tom with green eyes. Submitted by xXGalacticSkiesXx.
Blazefire, orange she-cat with yellow eyes. Submitted by xXGalacticSkiesXx.
Nightheart, black-and-white she-cat with a twisted front paw and blue eyes Tulippetal, white and gray-brown she-cat. Submitted by MagnoliaHeart.
Sorrelpelt, tortoiseshell she-cat. Submitted by MagnoliaHeart.
Silentgrowl, mute brown-and-white tom. Submitted by MagnoliaHeart.
SKYCLAN
13/12 warriors
1/1 leader CLOSED
3/3 queens CLOSED
8/8 kits CLOSED
1/1 deputy CLOSED
1/1 med. cat CLOSED
1/1 med. cat apprentice CLOSED
5/7 apprentices
6/5 elders CLOSED
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For AutumnClan!!!
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By XxGalacticSkiesxX
Maplefall
Gender: Female
Desc: a bright ginger she-cat with paler stripes and reddish markings, amber eyes and white paws
Clan: AutumnClan?
Rank: Queen
Mate: Oakwhisper- a dark crimson-brown tabby tom with black markings and yellow eyes
Kit(s): (pregnant still, 1 moon expecting)
Thanks!
~Dappleshade
Answer
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By CCMomAJ
Sorrowthefox they write stories because they have nothing better to do.
Rabbitburrows run
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By warriorcatskindness
Name:Rabbitburrow
Description:a sweet brave fierce yet kind stubborn funny swift she.
Looks:Black she with unique turquoise eyes.
Mom:Turqoseleg. A sweet swift black and white she with turquoise eyes and one leg missing.
Dad:Browneye. A rude tom with a black pelt and brown eyes.
Siblings:Wishflower:a sweet black and white she with brown eyes. Mistpaw: a sweet she with a Black pelt and unique turquoise eyes.(died in a flood)
Mate:none
Kits:none
Prologue:
“Turquoiseleg do you need to be so dumb!” The black tom screeched. “I’m not dumb! Just please stop yelling your gonna wake Mistkit,Wishkit, and Rabbitkit up!” She pleaded. Just then the soft voice of a kit spoke up. “Momma daddy, what’s happening why are cats screeching?” Rabbitkit asked. The clan watching the fight and tears were streaming down Turquoiselegs face. “Nobody’s screeching go to sleep.” She nudged Rabbitkit back to her sleepy siblings and curled around them. “It’s all right.” She whispered and they fell asleep again and she fell asleep to.
Chapter one:
I quickly covered my ears with moss as Waterdrop complained that we should be mates. I just snapped. “LOOK IM NOT GETTING A MATE SINCE MISTPAW CANT GET A MATE,US SISTERS MADE A PROMISE THAT WE’D ONLY GET MATES IF THE PTHERS DID MISTPAW DIDNT GET A MATE ME AND WISHFLOWER CANT GET MATES.” I snapped then I started crying. “We never had a happy life. Our parents fighting since the moment we were born, Mistpaw dying cats only asking me if I want to be there mate for my unique turquoise eyes.” I sobbed curling in my moss sinking myself into it and I felt the tears streaming down my face. “We are on an open moor we’re windclan but I failed to save my sister because I wasn’t fast enough.” I cried. But of course Waterdrop said, “That’s over and done with just take a run on the moor and then say yes to being my mate. Then I can brag to my friends about having the perfect mate.” He laughed. “Jurk!” I snapped. “Rabbitburrow!” I heard the deputy call my name. “Yes?” I asked as soon as I got out. “Look just ignore those stupid toms. Their nothing but trouble.” She hissed as soon as Waterdrop got in earshot. I smiled at that comment. “I will,” I promised.
Okay so chapter two will be in the next book!