Too short. Under developed
2
By Kimbo1216
I was nearing the end and expected a whole new twist at the end. Only to be jolted by an epilogue that tied everything up in a nice pretty bow. This story had the makings of true suspense yet wasn’t developed. I can let a lot go when reading, but between some of the nobility mistakes (ex. calling a duke a lord) and the lack of development with an abrupt ending, I’m only giving two stars.